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[Platform Tutorial]

Very good, but it needs some work...

The Information was good, but I think you need to work on the presentation a lot more, and break up the steps a bit more. Maybe add some pictures to make it a bit more aesthetically pleasing and less boring to read. Most people will see a wall of text and then go and look for tutorials elsewhere straight away.

Like ClumsyAssassin said, it has potential but it needs some work.

Kwing responds:

Thanks.